Witness

the effect of poetry

After Witnessing “Eye of the Needle”

she moved in midair

the gesticulations of her body

caused a spiral intonation

grace could be said only in the eye’s view

even an idiot could be awed

the poet though would melt into his awe 

carried somewhere only his soul knows.

Reviews

[sereenaoutloud]

so beautifully written and i love how you describe the poet going into his own world, deep inside where only he knows!! Brilliant

[Alfred Kukitz]

Good Morning Alf,

I am somewhere in your camp on this one. A poem drifts into you and suddenly you lay claim to an inspiration response. Thanks!

Regards,
Al

[alf]

Hi Alfred. I just love the poetic proclamation you make here!!!! This is like the smoothest honey dripping from a spoon, a slow cascadence of flow filled with wonderful imagery!!! a joy to read, alf

[Kelly Scheppers]

What a lovely response to "A Needle's Eye"...you have swept me off my feet, yet again! Thank you, darlin! x

[Alfred Kukitz]

Oh......Thank You Thomas. Glad you could visit and enjoy!

regards,

al

[Tom McRoberts]

Really illustrates the power the creative mind, and subsequently, the act of creation. I like it a lot, keep it up!

[Alfred Kukitz]

E.

We have been out of touch. Thanks! I have to give you a try.

regards,
al

[Einstein Noodle]

yes! and spills onto the pages .. nice one! spectacular visuals in that first verse .. "...spiral intonations" .. so good! at first i read spinal intonations ;)
E.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Pryde!

it's a real pleasure satisfying someone's mind when I know what an intellectual mind visited me.

regards,
al

[Pryde Foltz]

It is those moments when the words capture something so clearly and as never thought of before that makes it all worth it … extraordinary write.