Witness

the effect of poetry

After Witnessing “Eye of the Needle”

she moved in midair

the gesticulations of her body

caused a spiral intonation

grace could be said only in the eye’s view

even an idiot could be awed

the poet though would melt into his awe 

carried somewhere only his soul knows.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

One of my favorites Lydia! Thanks for your encouragement because I know what a great writer you are.


Regards,
Al

[Echoes of Eros]

I can feel the awareness of your words coming to life, and yes, the remarkable ripples that poetry pours into us. Such a mystical glimpse into thoughts and more.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Annie! Thanks Jane!

This piece has become popular. I can't believe all the people who have visited.

Regards,
Al

[Annie Gryphon]

I'm glad i stumbled into this little wise piece of poetry. Very lovely.

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Yes the poet....the artist of words....his soul is carried elsewhere....WOW beautiful poetry!!!

[Alfred Kukitz]

this gal is getting lots of attention thanks to Kelly Scheppers. thanks Lydia!

regards,
al

[Lydia Shutter]

Oh, yes, this is so very true. The poet looks at life...and words....just a little differently than other people do. The connotations of the soul are mixed with the definitions in the dictionary. Melting into poetry...a lovely concept. I liked this a lot. Lydi**

[Alfred Kukitz]

Hello Benita!

Thank you for your visit. I really loved your last poem. God Bless You my child!

Regards,
Al

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Beautiful and true words we poets
And poetess seem
to go to another world
when we write or at any time.

the poet though would melt into his awe
carried somewhere only his soul knows.

Thank you for sharing.


God bless Benita

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thank You Mr. Froman. I do believe Kelly Scheppers' allure caused this creative piece. Have you read her work? She's remarkable.

Regards,
al