Witness

the effect of poetry

After Witnessing “Eye of the Needle”

she moved in midair

the gesticulations of her body

caused a spiral intonation

grace could be said only in the eye’s view

even an idiot could be awed

the poet though would melt into his awe 

carried somewhere only his soul knows.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Szhzia!

I keep wondering how people find this old poem?

Regards,
Al

[SZHZIA]

Every thing relates to our soul, but only few people realize it. loving it, keep writing.

Best
Szhzia

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thank you Read Write!

It's been a humbling experience.

Regards,
Al

[ReedWrite]

Few people inspire these words: carried somewhere only his soul knows.
How beautifully said...loved this tribute.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Valentine!

It is said that a Valentine shall pass this way and sing the praises of the spiritual way.

Regards,
Al

[Valentine]

Many writes I have read reflect your words in your last grouping. Valentine

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks m.s.

It just goes on and on!

Regards,
Al

[m.s.early]

perfectly articulated with still great margins to swim in its interpretation

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Alfred Kukitz,
"Witness" The title itself helps me to begin to see that this is a response to something; not in technical terms but growing from life within. Melt into his awe and only his soul knows- coming from a special thing seen or experienced? Anyway read it over a couple times. Can't say I really understood but it was still a study in response rather than just seeing. Blessings Kathy

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Paul!

Kelly Sheppers is the responsible poet.

regards,
al