Come Along for a Walk

An invitation

Come Along for a Walk

I have a pair of lungs to compliment the atmosphere,
I'm sure you do too,
There is soil for the feet,
A little shuffle in the gait
My you look pretty in our morning air
Gentleman stop staring at the Ladies!
Oh! Did I forget?
A planet somewhere in the back of my mind.

I walk two dogs willingly,
Come on now keep up!
Our gait resembles a 10 legged friendly piece of information,
Watch now! We are turning!
How did you like that turn gang?
The dogs don't know about cornering space
They think it's all the same

Noses to the ground,
Just the dogs please,
Scents like old factory wizards
Oh what is that smell?
Perhaps it came from outer space
Can anyone here tell?


We have walked this walk many a time
Glad you came along
Now please give Honey & Jackson a little pat on the head!
They seem to like you all,
The Writer's Cafe folks have walked my dogs today!

Reviews

[Randall Messner]

The flow, the pace of your work gives me the feeling that I'm along on your walk. The rhymes follow as easy as taking another step. The structure fits. Beautifully done brought tears to my eyes with images of the dog friends I've had through the years.

[Alfred Kukitz]

It's 22 degrees on a Monday morning with frozen forest ground, silence singing its usual tune and a couple of noses to the ground. Thank you all!

Regards,
Al

[Kelly Scheppers]

I so very much enjoyed the coldness of their noses...and the warmth of your heart, in sharing this walk! I envy your love of them, Al...I miss having a dog in my life! They're the best companions!

[Moonie]

You had me with the first line, dear Al . What could be better than an early morning walk with two lovely dogs who definitely like you (liking is the key here...) Very vivid, and alluring. I didn't want the walk to end.. :))

[Alfred Kukitz]

You got it man!.....................

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i love dogs, and they behaved so well during the walk...tell them i will see them tomorrow for the next walk.

jacob