Holy Magic

a church of being

Holy Magic

A taste of rosary in my teeth
Prayers leaking out between the gaps
Counting on God in serendipitous form
I meander along an empty shore
The water of life drains from my veins
I hear something calling
But can't give it a name
My empyrean fate nears the
waterless shores
I'm leaning toward the unknown
It's a magic all its own!

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Moon's Fairest daughter,

Greetings! I've missed you. You seem to have a mystical quality and your pen name seems to carry it too. Thank you for visiting!

Regards,
Al

[Moonie]

Dear Al, I 've been away from the site for 2 months. Now I am trying to catch up on all the reviews. If there are any poems that you want me to read, do tell me. I have missed you and all the other Writer's café members. :) :)

[Alfred Kukitz]

I'm not sure what to tell you. Two months! Wow! I trust it was pleasant. Decide for yourself whether to read my work. It's okay to catch up with other writers. I can wait. Take care!
Regards,
Al

[Moonie]

You're always so humble, Al.
Though it wasn't pleasant, the break was like an eye opener for me. Take care! :) :)

[Moonie]

Miracles are beautiful. Who says we must only believe what we see..Pure, unadulterated magic is felt rather than seen.
Lovely words as always! :) My favourite lines would be
"I meander along an empty shore 
The water of life drains from my veins 
I hear something calling 
But can't give it a name "
And doesn't naming something destroy the magic. Aren't magical things always unnamed?

[Alfred Kukitz]

There is a women minister who believes that the darkness holds God. She lacks the "let all get to church" mentality that most religious people subscribe to. I think creation (outside) is a great place to find by not looking, letting it come to you.

Thank you gentlemen for your review!

Regards,
Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

god, fate, whatever is to come....taking life one day at a time, dealing with whatever comes and understanding there is always a reason for those things that happen along the way...Faith.

that is Holy Magic.

nicely done, my friend.

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Often what we get from church does not help us find our spirituality at all. Sometimes it is better to find oneself "leaning toward the unknown" so that we may quell the noise and allow God to enter. Nice write!