Speaking of Nightmares

fear would not come along

Speaking of Nightmares

You dealt several dreams out today

none of them seem to be working, 

what about a nice nightmare?

maybe two or three,

you light the fire that is so readily available,

Boom Boom,

We walk into the nightmare, simply smiling,

fear was to scared to come along,

we looked at nightmare asking

do you want to try a dream on for size?

it simply burped and went on its way!

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Hi SAMI,

A big thank you from me because I admire your poetry as much or even more.

Regards,
Al

[Sami Khalil]

Your poetry is amazing. No pun intended. It goes deeper than what is only the obvious. It should be totally appreciated...:).......

[Alfred Kukitz]

Hello Pryde & Jacob,

Glad you could visit and thank you much for your analysis.

Regards,

Al

[Pryde Foltz]

We walk into the nightmare, simply smiling,

fear was to scared to come along,

we looked at nightmare asking

do you want to try a dream on for size?

it simply burped and went on its way!

Love scares that fear away but humour is half bad either.Loved this

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow what a paradox, fear was too scared to come along?

interesting concept...hope the burp got something out of its system...

this made me think of alice cooper "welcome to my nightmare"
i also like the oxymoron of "nice nightmare"

jacob