Widening Circles

Widening Circles

A Story by Alfred Kukitz
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Widening Circles


In ever widening circles he seemed more aware of the binding 


anomalies that made up his life. The syncopated habits that weren't 


really habits at all. More so he felt a complete withdrawal of 


himself from futuristic thinking, it was a though a poem or some 


song had embraced his head and for some strange reason couldn't 


possible let go. He felt ambivalent, unsure of himself, more 


likely to just run off into some huge space in nature as though a 


celebration was about to take place and he was the imaginary 


special guest. 


“Man……I must be going crazy”, the loudness of his statement 


caught the ear of another soul standing at the edge of a wooded 


area just south of his view.


“Hello”! She called out. “Hello”, she repeated as to assure herself 


that he heard her. Her intuition told her that he may be a similar 


type person but it was only an intuitive guess. They stood in 


front of each other knowing now that yes they were similar people. 


His laughter initiated her laughter, hers was sweet with a twinge of 


off key entertainment. He loved it. His was deeper more rotund 


able to soar over buildings in one leap. They held hands, the 


electric of Whitman’s poem coursing through 


their souls. They were headed for the interior of the woods without 


a clue where they were going. 

© 2015 Alfred Kukitz


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Thank you Poppy! I love that picture of you. I'm trying to write more narrative, less poetry, perhaps I can get to the Golden Box. Love you!

Regards,
Al

Posted 9 Years Ago


How beautiful...living in the "now" and enjoying the journey not so much worrying about the destination...wise dear heart xo

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on February 18, 2015
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Tags: habits, anomalies, whitman, electric

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Alfred Kukitz
Alfred Kukitz

Deering, NH



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