The Fatigue

The Fatigue

A Poem by Alfred Kukitz
"

enlarged hearts tend to sleep

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The Fatigue

It's a 9 B.C. wake up
I'm feeling the 9
The B.C. comes later

You slip into Before
While Christ wraps around
your huge heart.
Sleep child sleep
You've gone to war
It's now time to rest.

© 2015 Alfred Kukitz


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Hi J.K.

Thanks for stopping by! Take care!

Regards,
Al

Posted 9 Years Ago


What a well wrought piece... I imagine a fatigued (dressed) fatigued (weary) soldier being welcomed by Christ with a whispered promise of rest... such a deserved sleep... such a beautiful embrace... Just lovely!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ladies & Gentlemen,

Thank you for your visit. That lonely soldier thanks you too.

Regards,
Al

Posted 9 Years Ago


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wow.. this is so reassuring and peaceful. A wonderful lullaby for the soldier that died.

Posted 9 Years Ago


fascinating write Al, Christ lifts us from war to give us rest, a beautiful poem :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on February 10, 2015
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Alfred Kukitz
Alfred Kukitz

Deering, NH



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