UPON HER ARRIVAL

a visit with a mysterious women

Upon Her Arrival

A small will of time
An envelope of sound
Surrounding the roses
You came to me
Out of the ether
Asking timeless questions
Whereupon I begged for more
You heeded my words
As I kneeled before you
in a tear of understanding.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

I'm so glad you read this one. I thought perchance that women was you.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I can see why you are so proud of this one, Alfred. I am awed by such lines as "a small will of time", and "in a tear of understanding".

Stay warm, and keep writing, my friend!

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Julie. I'm really tickled by this poem.

[MsJewel]

I love the dream like feel to your words Al.
"an envelope of sound
surrounding the roses"

stunning imagery!

:) Julie

[Alfred Kukitz]

You know how I feel when you guys visit me. I am moved beyond all expectations. Thank you so much!

[Sami Khalil]

Amazing and wonderful beyond words. You are deep and deeply valued...:).... .

[jacob erin-cilberto]

what great images, "A small will of time/ An envelope of sound"

when someone finally listens to us, really listens to us, there can be understanding and real love.

nicely done, AL...
jacob