Two Men

Two Men

A Poem by Alfred Kukitz
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Diverse worlds

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Two Men

Yes Sir.......Yes sir!
Ladies & Gentlemen,
Seal........Navy Seal, Sir!
I'm your host Mr. Who,
Take right flank,
You can win a million dollars!
Foxtrot Charlie Alpha, do you read?
And now a word from our sponsor,
Eyes on the target, we have visual!
Now for our first contestant,
Man down.....we have a man down.






© 2014 Alfred Kukitz


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Vanesa I do hope we become buddies. You are a good write! Thanks for visiting!

al

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is great work!
I read it in 3 different ways,
was such a joy to discover!
Thanks!
-VM


Posted 9 Years Ago


Thanks Jacob! I changed it slightly since Ana read it but only slightly.

Posted 9 Years Ago


i totally agree with Ana...couldn't have said it better myself...

that poor first contestant....unfortunately there will be many more on the show before it is over.

Posted 9 Years Ago


That was a brilliant way of illustrating how far removed we are from reality sometimes.
This was very good.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on December 30, 2014
Last Updated on December 30, 2014
Tags: Foxtrot, who, seal, navy

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Alfred Kukitz
Alfred Kukitz

Deering, NH



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