Finding Snowman

Finding Snowman

A Poem by Alfred Kukitz
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Can we find grace

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Finding Snowman


There is almost an ancient wisdom

In these small flakes of snow.

Gathered and rolled,

Spheres forming akin to our planet's form

Where may we find the snowman?

His glistening form speaking a child's grace

But the storm batters the searching eyes

How can we find our grace?


© 2014 Alfred Kukitz


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i wish we could find our grace, the snowman is a paradox....there is youth, making the snowmen that is innocent fun....a "child's grace" yes, but there is also the long carrot nose, reminding us of the liars in the world, those who glisten with a snow flake's promise, but then bury us in a blizzard of deception.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Thank you Benita for your visit. God bless!

Posted 10 Years Ago



So beautiful and very true
they're covered in Childhood memories
of playing in the snow making snow angels
and snow forts and have snow ball fights
and sliding in the snow.


"There is almost an ancient wisdom

In these small flakes of snow"


Thank you for this sweet innocent
little piece and for stopping by my page.



I am being careful with my wrist
I had a ice pack on it a little bit ago
it is healing but maybe a little longer
but isn't a lot of pain at the moment.


God bless. Benita

Posted 10 Years Ago


So true! Can we replace the carrot with a stone?

Posted 10 Years Ago


i wish we could find our grace, the snowman is a paradox....there is youth, making the snowmen that is innocent fun....a "child's grace" yes, but there is also the long carrot nose, reminding us of the liars in the world, those who glisten with a snow flake's promise, but then bury us in a blizzard of deception.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Alfred Kukitz
Alfred Kukitz

Deering, NH



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