Verbose

Verbose

A Poem by Alfred Kukitz
"

did i say that

"

You speak a hundred word syllable,

“but I meant…….but I meant……..

the blather goes on,

the syntax scrambles for words,

you may emotion yourself to death

while on lookers cash in their chips

and the gamble for words come out flat & verbose.

© 2014 Alfred Kukitz


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Hey Pryde! You remain worthy of your promise. I thank you very much.

Posted 9 Years Ago


the syntax scrambles for words,
you may emotion yourself to death
while on lookers cash in their chips

I think the key is to be truthful regardless of what level of language you choose to communicate with … I think the problem lies when one tries to show off with language and the flip side when one sees a word they are not familiar with and take it as a personal slight … when ego write or reads … it is always painful. A clever write here. Alfred.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Hi guys! Ana I'm glad you put your picture back; you're more beautiful. Jacob, I can't say the same for you, but both of you have great souls. Thank you!

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is great...so tongue-in-cheek...and I like the use of "emotion" as a verb---

"emotion yourself to death"

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sometimes the value of things gets lost in all the wrapping.



Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on December 2, 2014
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Tags: blather, verbose, syntax, syllable

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Alfred Kukitz
Alfred Kukitz

Deering, NH



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