Mom's Gone

The Death of Mom

Mom's gone to the winds,
She wants me to pity her
because I wasn't there for her passing.
Sorry Mom!
I can see her flying in the clouds,
A celestial being,
free of all that weighted her down.
She loves her awakening,
Now is her chance to love her husband,
Perchance she visit the magical realms,
Carry herself like an earthly angel
She possessed while living.
Good bye Mom,
I'll breathe deep so the air you are in
is a part of me.
Good bye Mom,
I love you.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thank you all for your heartfelt thoughts. May she rest in peace!

[Avinash]

Alfred my Friend you may not completely agree with me but I am sorry for your loss.

[Moonie]

Ah, that is something that touched my heart. Your words are beautiful!

[Alfred Kukitz]

For sure. Mother was burden with many burdens.

[Marie]

A nice tribute... wonder to be a celesitial being, unweighted with earth's burdens...

[Alfred Kukitz]

Always good to see your visit here Jacob. Sorry for your loss. Thanks......thanks much!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow, you know i can surely relate to tihs poem, having recently lost my mother...

"i'll breathe deep so the air you are in/ is a part of me"

i like that concept...thank you for this poem.

jacob