Watch Those Turns in the Road

When Nothing Works

My words turn to a milky white on a white background.

Puns, jokes stand aghast in vehicular contortions.

I may seem witty but I lost myself to numbness a fortnight ago.

Cantankerous musings stir inside the bell of my mind.

I am ding-a-ling watching the seasons change into nightfall.

The hope I once had evaporated in a photo shoot on a foggy morning.

The Jpeg of my being forever posted on a blog in never land.

Come see me I might know you by the smell in your curtains!

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thank you ReneeJ for your comments.

Regards,
Al

[ReneeJ]

Great poem, short but enough to satisfy the reader. I am always impressed by short pieces, because it takes so much out of me to cut down my work.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Amduscia, I don't believe I have seen you before. Are you new? Thanks for the visits and kind words.

[Amduscia]

Brilliant piece of Poetry. Nice work.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Well Ivoryvine, thank you, thank you so much for your visit.

[Author Rucha Joshi]

This is a beautiful poem! loved it!

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Chris, thanks for visiting!

[Christopher Robin]

Admirably abstract, relaxing and refreshing.

Nicely penned,

-Robin

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thank you! This piece was written while listening to a Keith Jarret solo piano piece, Radiance.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is amazing. You make the words dance and move.
"I may seem witty but I lost myself to numbness a fortnight ago.
Cantankerous musings stir inside the bell of my mind.
I am ding-a-ling watching the seasons change into nightfall."
The poem tempted the reader to want to read more of your words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote