A Chill of Time

There is a time for one' s end.

I dare say a shiver
Is coming around
The bend.
Men will fall
Feeling an end.

In the hopes of a famous
Telltale sign
Meaning meets us all
On the chill of time.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Oh Donna thanks for the visit. I liked your work! Welcome to the Writer's Cafe!

[Donna Marie Gray]

Very interesting concept on one's end. Your perception and insight is food for thought. I enjoyed your unusual point of view. Well done.

[Alfred Kukitz]

"To go back to the same place and know it for the first time" T.S. Eliot

I think of Vietnam that way, all that senseless killing.

Thank you Elisa!

This little poem, has so much to say, it speaks of fear, of death, of the chill first without a meaning, but a meaning soon to catch. There is indeed a time for one's end, and those who aren't afraid, live richly.

Thank you Alfred for such a great little piece of writing. As young as I maybe am, death has been always a part of me too.

- Elisa

[Alfred Kukitz]

Laurie! Thank you for visiting. I must return the favor. Good tidings!

[Lauriegirl]

I love this!
This is a great writing that in such brevity brings the point of the author home!..

[Alfred Kukitz]

Always grateful when you visit Sami......always!

[Sami Khalil]

"I dare say a shiver
Is coming around
The bend.
Men will fall
Feeling an end.

In the hopes of a famous
Telltale sign
Meaning meets us all
On the chill of time."

[Sami Khalil]

A chilling write but wonderful in its relevance and depth. You do it right...:)...............