Wishing You Were Here

Wishing You Were Here

A Poem by Alfred Kukitz
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Foolishness pays a visit.

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I am here to feel the wind in my ears. 

I stand straight, look ahead, feel the air around me, 

The words in my mouth slowly circle in an oral darkness. 

They are voiced inside me like a journal entry or a secret to myself.

I turn 180 degrees, smile like the shine in the sun. 

I'm lured into these ridiculous moments because I can. 

I just wish you could be here with me.

© 2014 Alfred Kukitz


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Thanks Amos. It could be an exercise in mental journal keeping.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Enjoyable read, the way you depicted your moment and covet...simply marvelous my friend!

Posted 10 Years Ago


The foolishness in me with a pinch of comic insight. Thank you! I trust your tears were wet with joy Benita!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This was so Beautiful it made me Cry thank you
for sharing this lovely Heartfelt piece.


I'm lured into these ridiculous moments because I can.

I just wish you could be here with me.


Blessings. Benita/ Kindred poet

Posted 10 Years Ago


Nice words ! describing all the feeling a person has when he feels lonely and shallow inside, you did a great job ..
'I turn 180 degrees, smile like the shine in the sun.
I'm lured into these ridiculous moments because I can.'
These lines were my favourite.
It was worth a read. keep rocking.

Posted 10 Years Ago


if only that person with whom we had shared so much of life could be here to share this ridiculous moment with me...

i can still smile, i remember...we would smile together...if you were here.

jacob

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on July 27, 2014
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Tags: journal, entry, oral, darkness, shine

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Alfred Kukitz
Alfred Kukitz

Deering, NH



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