No Screams in the Alleyways

Murdering visits the alleyways

Murdered breath
Escaping though
Dark alleyways

Evil surrounds
Your nostrils
Exhaled dirt

Light gathers
It's worst crime
A child unable to scream!

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Diego your comments are detailed and insightful.

[Tree]

Foreboding, & dark. You step away from this poem not with any detail, but with all the horror. That last stanza, and I don't why after all it is only a poem, broke my heart.
This piece leaves you grasping for straws, AK, but at the same time wanting to get away.

Evocative, and well composed.