In the Silence of My Person

Many past moments fall by the wayside of memory. I know there are many I can't recall.

There is a small inkling of sadness washing over my old forgotten memories. I hear echoes of a man I knew vaguely who seem to have vanished in the wind. The wish here is all those beautiful moments to come running home and live with me in the silence of my person.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Hi Ed,

This is a good one. I like it too. Thanks for visiting and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Al

[Ed Fagan]

In such a short space I found myself alone with these words living their impact.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Kelly! When you visit I just want to cry.

[Kelly Scheppers]

...if only we could gather them up once more, and embrace them! A most beautiful expression, Alfred!

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks John, Thanks Jacob! There are times I wish my words were similar to yours. Both of you are excellent writers and I really value your critiques.

[John Anderson]

this is a great poem...strong writing with deep emotional impact...excellent job!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

as time goes on those memories will come back, they have to...but i like the way you worded this.."beautiful moments to come running home and live with me in the silence of my person>"

very cool lyric...wish i had written that.