Yet to come, yes- yet to come. I appreciate this discourse on perfection. Well said. I particularly appreciate the positivity you hold despite the recognition of scars and flaws. You do touch on living in the darkness, the shadow world, using it to hide our own faults. But yet, again, you hold the positivity.
We hope my friend.
"We’re past glory lost,
Harkening to a melody of
A new golden age
Yet to come, yet to come."
I was told by my father. What you did yesterday. Doesn't matter. What matters is. What you do today. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry Laz.
Coyote
Yet to come, yes- yet to come. I appreciate this discourse on perfection. Well said. I particularly appreciate the positivity you hold despite the recognition of scars and flaws. You do touch on living in the darkness, the shadow world, using it to hide our own faults. But yet, again, you hold the positivity.
this is so good, Laz.
tears are something I seem to have trouble shedding with real life...crying within...
a movie can tear me up...real life makes me wonder if I am stone cold.
I have a dear friend whom I envision as a work of art...but so broken from life, and yet mysteriously capable of giving others such brightness in their lives.
this poem definitely fits her...
and affects me.
j.
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