Untangling The Web

For the 'One Letter Poem' contest. Letter- U Starter- Untangling the web.

Untangling the web

I call it my life

It's so messed up

So full of strife

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So full of fakes

Whom ruin my days

They want to hurt me

They have their ways

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Tears fall down my face

There's to much going on

I'm trapped in emotion

Trapped like a fawn

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A fawn left alone

Just left there to die

So much was happening

I couldn't help but cry

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The storms calming down

The drama is leaving

Yet still, I feel

My heart, Heaving.

Author's Note

For a contest, so don't be to Tough.

Reviews

[Jen]

A couple of type-o's stood out to me (my editor gets hung up on those all the time, so don't take it too personally.)

"Whom ruin my days" should be who ruin my days

"There's to much going on" should be there's too much going on

Otherwise, well done. I think you've described most highschooler's feelings. For some of us, that carries on. Very nice. Thank you for sharing.

[CarolynLewisPoe]

:D I give it a thumbs up...sounds like my life was.....

[The Cougar's Den]

The storms calming down
The drama is leaving
Yet still, I feel
My heart, Heaving.

SWEET ENDING! Very nicely written!
Great job and I hope you do well in the contest!