Candy Hearts And Paper Love Notes

Love, The slowest form of suicide.

Candy hearts and paper love notes
Candy hearts eaten
Love notes faded

Paper hearts and texted love notes
Paper hearts trashed
Love notes deleted

Beating hearts and instant love notes
beating hearts sop
love notes forgotten

Broken hearts and taunting love notes
Broken hearts mended
Love notes burned

Dead hearts and outdated love notes
Dead hearts rot
Love notes invalid

Reviews

[Marina]

This is really good.
I absolutley love it.

As [Seeki] says, it shows all the stages of love.
I love the whole idea of the poem and I don't think it could have been written any better.

Also, I love how you put, "Love, the slowest form of suicide."
Awsome job.

Great write!

XxStaySweet,
Rinaaaaaaaaaaaa

[!KILEY?]

This is sort of sad. But i really love it.

This is a great poem, and I think the whole concept is fantastic.
Great write.

-Kiley

[[Mackenzie]]

It shows all of the stages of love, and what happens. It's well written, and interesting. It caught my eye, and I'm glad I've read it!

[MadasonBlue]

This is kind of sad, but very good. Interesting way of going through every phase of love.