Broken

Broken

A Poem by FishOutOfWater

I feel it. The demons. They're here and I can see them. Some are smiling, some are laughing cruelly and some are just watching. But they all have one goal, to rip open the black hole that ive been trying to close for so long. I see them grabbing the edges and ripping away chunks of white light. Theyre making sure its big enough so when the time comes they'll swarm over me. Shoving me into the supermassive black hole. I thought id be Okay. I mean i knew itd hurt but its too much now. I'm drowning. And I can't come up. I can't swim. I don't want to anyway. I feel heavy. Broken. Lost. I have to stop feeling or its just too much. It hurts so bad. I just want it to stop. I want everything to stop

© 2017 FishOutOfWater


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i love this piece. it kind of represents your inner thoughts and how they can take you over at times, without control. i understand this piece on many different levels

Posted 7 Years Ago


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FishOutOfWater

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much. I wrote it in a dark place and its helped me heal

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FishOutOfWater
FishOutOfWater

Apache junction, AZ



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I want to be remembered. I want to soak my soul into others and bring about them the life they're suppose to have. I want to be that wake up call that once you put my writings down you're inspired. more..

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