Demon Taking Over Me

Calling to me
Whispering sweet lullaby's in my ear
Telling me to sleep
Hushing my cries into complete silence
Demanding my full attention
Comanding me to say things i don't want to say 
Making me do things i don't want to do
Scarring me from inside and out
Weakening me
Forcing me to obey
Making promises that i never see
Bending me
Breaking me
Into nothing but a weak form on the floor
Born on the floor
Possessed on the floor
Dying on the floor

Reviews

[Gone]

Very descriptive and dark. It reminds me of where I once was. Trapped between two worlds unable to escape the old life in order to embrace the new. That feeling of powerlessness even though you see through the lies. Magnificent.

[Claude]

The feeling of powerlessness this piece portrays borders on frightening. The title drew me in to investigate. I'm glad I did!

[cfix]

dark and wonderful

[Hello, Goodbye]

very precise in your form and delivery.. I like the pointed direction..