What i've done..

What i've done..

A Poem by AlisshalovesBrandon

Splattered across the floor
Dripping from my hands
The Cold sharp knife in my hands
Coated with blood
The Memory playing in my head
Slashing,Tearing,Ripping
Their screams ringing in my ears
Begging,Pleading,Screaming
No one heard them
No one but me
Hot tears run down my face
As i look at what I've done
It started out as an argument
Ended in blood

© 2010 AlisshalovesBrandon


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I hope this is not a confession! lol. Well presented, nicely worded and an easy rhyme. nice work

Posted 13 Years Ago


so visually despondent.. i love it.. the imagery is potent and its finally is resolute and captivating..

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Added on November 29, 2010
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AlisshalovesBrandon
AlisshalovesBrandon

Marion, OH



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i am 16 years old, i live in Ohio (which is one the yuckiest states) still in high school, not trying to be dramatic because my life pretty much sucks except for a few things, , my animals, and my fri.. more..

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