Bugged.

Poem - ATC

Bzzzz.

Flying little a*****e is doing my head in.

But I tolerate the twerp because to kill him doesn't seem right. 

Swat it. Like life's nothing. 

What it's just a bug it's not like it's worth surviving. 

It doesn't benefit me or humanity at all, so squash its guts all over the wall.

The blood you see doesn't matter at all. 

That pain did'n't exist because you didn't feel it.

Bzzzz that flying little a*****e is doing my head in. 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of thoughts. Left the reader with many questions.
"Swat it. Like life's nothing.
What it's just a bug it's not like it's worth surviving.
It doesn't benefit me or humanity at all, so squash its guts all over the wall."
Sometime annoyance can be accepted and sooner or later. They get bore and leave us alone. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

Thank you Coyote :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Kayla]

I really love the way it was written!
:)
Great job!

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

Thank you very much!

[sereenaoutloud]

Too funny, i really liked this both the simple take of the annoyance of those damn flies and the deeper meaning how we put up will peoples annoyances daily wanting to swat them but knowing it isn't right!

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

I'm pleased you liked it, it's interesting you saw the fly as a fellow person.

[~]

A clever title :) with a good message. Annoyance is not the reason for extermination. :)

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

Thanks :) I got the inspiration from "Breaking Bad" haha

[....................]

It is good to be able to put ourselves in the shoes of others. I love this clever little write.

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

Thank you very much :) Your picture always makes me giggle

[....................]

You are kindly welcome and I am happy to bring a smile to your face.

FT

[Jamestown]

Hilarious!!! Now this is a piece everyone will relate to, very creative and
well written, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

Thanks :):) Glad you enjoyed it!