Smile Sunshine

Prose - ATC

Like the sunshine a new day lifts us if we choose, breathe it in let it consume you.

Get out of bed take care of ourselves be involved in what is new be aware be awake but sleep when you need to eat and live.

Better yourself learn a new skill you don't need money,

Exercise, grip on to what's left of the nature around you educate yourself even if it's raining the internet is usually available and if it isn't there are books and stories to get stuck into!

Don't give up.

Hope.

Don't judge don't even hold a grudge or try to even though you want to because s**t isn't fair.

Create even if you are hurting even if you hate learn to laugh and love again so that you can care like you're supposed to. Garden, children, animals, each other. Just love okay and don't stop no matter what.

The sun will be there tomorrow.

You are the sunshine.

And the Earth needs you. Now more than ever it seems.

Please don't take our sunshine away.

Smile. The strength in people amazes me more than the evil that astounds me so smile brighter it's how we fight in silence it's how we drown out violence patience endurance it's not the easy way out it's what is the right thing to do. 

Reviews

[Shon Harvis]

I really love this. As someone looking for a reason to do so I felt like someone standing over me to remind me that I have one.

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

:) thank you i am glad

[W R Stowe]

Very well said a smile is radient sunshine and can make a difference in somebodys life.And you present this smile in your well written poem

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

thank you very much for reading and your kind words :) i am happy it left you feeling positive

[W R Stowe]

I stay positive always I own nothing just a stewart God placed in charge of his posessions and your most welcome

[beautiful dreamer]

this is a little off-putting at first because of the uncharacteristic format but once you delve into the words its profoundly beautiful and inspiring. wonderful work.

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

maybe i should edit the beginning, see i felt like a plant in the first part maybe i could work on expressing that thanks :)

[beautiful dreamer]

that would definitely expand you meaning. you might try grouping into stanzas as well instead of one long thing. it would be aesthetically more pleasing and you'd get clearer transitions that way :)