The Hippy Poem

The Hippy Poem

A Poem by Tinotenda Nyevedzanai
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I do what I feel

To survive and for love

Why deny yourself such pleasurable endeavors?


I’ve been cheated, I’ve been robbed!

I want my freedom back

I want to be indubitably nude and rude and all that…

As intended by nature,

I want healthy food in fact I don’t want these murders,

I want my planet in tact.


And paper trees just don’t suit me

I want the forests to come back

You can’t run through real estate

You’ll just get happy slapped.


So please Mr Law man,

Just let me build a house

Then I promise Mr Big-shot

I’ll be quiet as a mouse

You can love your money,

Whilst I’m busy getting aroused.








 

                                     

© 2015 Tinotenda Nyevedzanai


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A very chipper way to convey a rather intense subject. I dig!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tinotenda Nyevedzanai

10 Years Ago

Thanks C. :)
a la Russell brand. Cool.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tinotenda Nyevedzanai

10 Years Ago

I admire Mr Brands literacy skills, he is a great mind of today. :)
charlie

10 Years Ago

You said it! I agree
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ANM
That made me laugh especially the last line! It was out of the blue, great poem loved it. Humour and a serious subject do mix you proved it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tinotenda Nyevedzanai

10 Years Ago

Thanks :):) why be serious haha
ANM

10 Years Ago

Life is to short for that....

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Added on March 3, 2014
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Tinotenda Nyevedzanai
Tinotenda Nyevedzanai

Dallas, Kent



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Just a fifteen year old who enjoys reading and writing. Music makes me happy. New works are in the making and are going to be published soon more..

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