Coffee Shop Encounter

I met you with whipped cream on my nose,

You stared at me not seeming to care,

when dawn came, we came to a close,

and faded into the morning air.

 

I knew I needed to break my bond,

with the boy who held my hand,

and when the third week dawned,

I had carried out my plan.

 

Free as I was now to know you,

even with our distance in time,

together in our coffee cups we grew,

not quite sure what there was to find.

 

Now, in this day you make me smile,

pretending,  to be a grown man,

even though I will talk awhile,

I have to be true to who I am.

 

Author's Note

It is a bit rough, I wrote it in about 10 min so feel free to give suggestions.

Reviews

[KeeD]

It's amazing haha, My mind traveled to a coffee shop, I sat on the couch over there and stared into my coffee and all I could think of was how well this was written. This is the second time I'm reading this. It's like one casual encounter can inspire, reflect and motivate. A life changer or just a cup of coffee that tasted great. Gives us all hope, what's to lose :D 15 secs of courage is all it takes to ask a pretty lady out on a coffee date.

[Alissa]

You, my good sir, just made my day with your review. You completely understand my point of view when writing this and it makes me very happy. Thank you for the wonderful compliments!

[tworeeler]

Great job for something written off-the-cuff.
You make it look effortless.

[Alissa]

Thank you, I appreciate it :)

[Megara]

awesome! no suggestions here!

[Alissa]

Thank you very much :)