Is it really over?

Days had passed and there's still no response
There's no more connection between us
And no more tears that fall
From our tired eyes
Is it really over?

 

I don't know how it all happened
It flew so fast that none of us ever noticed.
It started with a stupid joke,
That continued to be an awful fight.
There's still no ending... yet.

 

They said true friends are never
Out of second chances
I believed it until the day that
Everything changed.
For the years that we've been together,
Nobody expected someone to be so cold.

 

We tried a million times
For just another chance
We asked for forgiveness 
For something none of us did.

 

They say 'learn to understand each other',
But how can we do it if
Immaturity and pride comes in between
And ruin it all?
We all have our own faults
But no one expected it to come to this.

 

'I believe everything happens for a reason',
Like Marilyn Monroe would have said.
'People change so that you can learn to let go'
But, i want to know right now,
Is it really over?

Reviews

[~Lizzy♬]

This was a beautiful romance poem you wrote here. :)

[technocrew]

ya'll emotot:))but nice one girl;)

[maryjaneuy]

It's really hard to lose someone especially when pride comes in between. don't worry. everything will be okay, for sure. :)

[WriterSki7]

Letting go is always tough. But so is changing. I'm not trying to throw around an accusation or anything, but do you really care for each other if you let pride and immaturity get in the way?

In a nation where adults act like children and fools are exalted it's hard to find something worth standing for. I'd say good poem, but you already know that. ;)

[Huggy Bear]

It is a question we ask ourselves when a relationship is on its last legs. You really encapsulate this feeling well:)

[Dev]

Nice emotion behind it. Nice read. Did not flow as easily as the previous one but nonetheless good read

[A Lone Creative Nomad]

That was really touching. Falling outs between friends hurt a lot, but at least you made it sound beautiful!

[deeps]

I really adore your last staza, It's wonderful!
Amazing write here, creative too.
I like this alot! Well written.

[elyza0926]

this is once again an amazing poem. adding a marilyn monroe quote gave the perfect touches. the flow of the story was uptight until the last line. good job!

[Poeticpiers]

you are a creative writer with a mature outlook. Presenting your ideas in poetic prose