Make you mine again

Make you mine again

You can go back to the place

But not in time.

You can see the people you loved

But you cannot repeat what you had before.

What happened in the past

Is just a pleasant memory now.

Just a window of yesterday,

That you sometimes want to have a glimpse again.

While you murmur to yourself,

‘I wish I can bring back what

Happened before so that I can change

The wrong decisions destiny had made

And make you mine again.’

Reviews

[maryjaneuy]

nice write. it's better if it's written as a prose. :)

[rockinmiley555]

:( so many sad memories when i read this... and some good ones :)

[PaperHearts]

Very nice write! I thought that you expressed your emotions really well, and I could feel the regret and wistfulness behind your words. I really liked the line about the memories being a window of yesterday. This was a really creative, thought-provoking write. Great job,
~PaperHearts

[St.Jimmy]

wow! awesome piece of writing
sometimes wrong decisions make us suffer
very well written
Keep up the good work!
~Aaradhya

[WriterSki7]

Destiny?
Is that what we tell ourselves?
Ah, that's just me. Good poem.

[Huggy Bear]

Brilliant poem:)

[alison13]

thank you so much for your reviews! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

The sadness of times and losing people in a life. I made a thousand wishes to done different things in my past. A wise person learn to think before you speak. Be kind even in a goodbye. Poem is sad and the story has the wish for things to be different. A excellent poem.

Coyote

[blackrose24]

You can see the people you loved
But you cannot repeat what you had before.

these lines are really true.. i like it..keep it up..

[rielovella]

Wow! Alison13 you really amaze me. Even though you dont experience yet these things, you can still write good poems.
Keep up the good work!