Sometimes  When You Cross my Mind

Sometimes When You Cross my Mind

A Poem by Alisa Js

I thought of her today as I sometimes do
in  bittersweet  fragmented wisps,
a brief hi-ho
that familiar slash inside my soul


was it really her I missed
or the mystery of 
a Mother's love
I never knew,
not in the way of most ...

© 2023 Alisa Js


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Hi my friend it’s been forever but I love this juxtaposition. The hi ho sound almost jolly and then the slas (pain. Loss) to even it out. I have missed your words. I trust things are well on your part of the planet?

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Alisa Js

11 Months Ago

Hello and Happy New Year! so nice to hear from you again! Still living the dream out here in Parad.. read more
Alisa,
Woo! Like stepping on a nail, this one requires I stop and think, of so many fragmented wisps that slash (love the image). They cut so clean! Some are like a Rothco, some a Klimt, some Picasso, and some a Dali... but then, there are those by O'Keefe that make me want to freeze right there forever...
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Posted 1 Year Ago


Alisa Js

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind and thoughtful response

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Alisa Js
Alisa Js

honolulu, HI



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