You

A Poem by Alisa Js

how do you explain

how could this actually be?

it was like seeing again for the first time in a long time

as I looked your way,

quite unexpectedly

what a surprise.

your hair, caressed by the soft, summer wind

under the hot, blazing sun

and the light of your smile,

oh! how, it caught me off guard

© 2023 Alisa Js

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Tara

Hi my long lost friend. Why pray tell do I want to change surprise to sunrise? This speaks of the power of love and lust and of all the delectable and dangerous craziness of it all. You are and have always been the greatest romantic of us all ! Sending big hugs.

Posted 11 Months Ago

10 Months Ago

Thank you, Tara for stopping by and for your kind comments. I will be by soon.

Perdition

It occurred to me only now that it has been my terrible manners, as I had not returned the review, but your absence has been quite the stretch, and never did I expect a fresh wound such as this...again you write of love but the steps toward its expression are personal and rare and unsufferable in strange regard..wonderfully so. The years have added a layer of voice well practiced..Have you been holding out on us or something? It's beautiful Hawaii and not a single thing is "just beyond your reach"..lol. Do not kill me as of yet as I still may be of use though I doubt it and I know I will pay for this but it was worth it. Now THIS, young lady, is poetry in the highest regard!! Bravissimo!!...don't say it!!..lol.~