After Thoughts, a Series. Part 9

it was in the midst of everything
that suddenly I realized
and stepped outside myself
you were never real.
I was in love with a ghost
and like this lonely lemon tree
I will find the will to survive

AlisaJs(c)2018

Reviews

[Corset]

a brave and beautiful tree she is too, so funny that the lemon tree song was in my head for days about a month ago " lemon tree very pretty and the lemon flower is sweet but the fruit of the poor lemon is impossible to eat" you are such a beautiful survivor.

[Alisa Js]

Thank you for your kind words..

I trust all is well.

Alisa

[Hi]

You make your point and I like the picture, but I felt a disconnect like there wasn't a transition with ghost and lemon tree. It feels like the metaphor jumps too quick. Maybe if there was a ghost in the picture or something else...? Or do I just need to read the rest of the series to get it?

[Alisa Js]

Yes, you need to read the rest..

lol

Alisa