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the attraction was completely scurrilous

skating around edges with unbelievable breach

as the music slowed,

how could we believe in forever?

there was a rise in the madness that ensued

crying for hours while pounding for clues,

nothing held beyond the second wind

and yet we persisted,

in spite of

certain betrayal

that tissue of lies.

it's never easy in hindsight

with all of the facts laid bare 

shaking with stage fright

there was an answer 

we never discovered,

guess it was better 

at 

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[Tony Jordan]

"The worst of all deceptions is self-deception" (Plato) yet if something looks like a duck and walks like a duck then...
I think we can all relate to this Alisa - a common flaw of the human condition.
Bittersweet to the nth degree my friend.

[Alisa Js]

Thank you, Tony...

I wonder why it is that some of us keep wanting to believe in spite of...

... everything???

Thank you for stopping by...I will be by soon.

Alisa ;-)

[Tony Jordan]

I guess the indomitable spirit, the tenacious personality - all the things that keep fighters fighting on, can't be applied to just certain aspects of our lives - it is applied across all (inc love and believe in same) or none - and theres the rub.
take care my friend
:))

[Alisa Js]

Thank you, Tony...

Thank you for your time and comments. I believe as long as we have breath, we have hope...

And as long as we have hope, we can fight to see another day...

Every day is a precious gift...reminding us to be present..

Sending you smiles :-) across the miles between us...

Alisa ;-)

[Tony Jordan]

Ditto Alisa - ditto my friend.
:)