Endless

Endless

A Poem by Alisa Js

and I 
have always been the one
to be the friend I would love to have

good times or not
I am there
and yet

who is there for me?

no one.

it never changes
no, not a bit

seasons come and go
their stories all the same
stepping stones to another place

crying in the pain...

© 2017 Alisa Js


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Personally, I find alone time very important. The space between action and ongoing thoughts is where my creative ideas are born. However, if solidarity is thrust upon us due to negative circumstances the shortcomings can adversely effect one's relationship with ourself. I found a sadness in your write, which is relatable to low moments I've experienced; thus the composition and structure of your wonderful piece succeeds in it's message to the reader! Well done my friend ...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Alisa Js

7 Years Ago

Hello Phil,

Thank you for your time and comments. I do agree with you that time alone.. read more
and sometimes i think we are the kind of people who want to be there for others, but shy away from burdening others with our problems...we are hesitant to reach out---
but yes, as you state in the poem...one sided-friendships...well, they usually don't last so long.

j.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Alisa Js

7 Years Ago

Thank you j,

I wonder why it is sometimes that we can be blinded by the most obvious... read more
Dear Alisa. We will have few real friends. Sometime life take away our old friends. We must keep in contact with and ensure we are not forgotten. I understand this poem. I work and work. Little time for old friends and fun. Thank you for sharing your poetry and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Alisa Js

7 Years Ago

Hello Coyote,

Thank you for stopping by. I agree with you in that in life, our true f.. read more
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

I always enjoy your work and you are welcome Alisa.

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