Catching Swoon

your words, they touch the very part

one never sees

a beating heart.

laughter on a winter's day

warms this soul

even though we're miles apart

we'll meet inside the multiverse

we'll sing and dance from night till day,

where you'll wait for me

I'll soon be there

and together we'll pass the stars

touch the moon,

catching swoon...

Reviews

[Hi]

Very whimsical; apart, but very together. Thanks.

[Alisa Js]

Glad you enjoyed this one.. I am of the belief that when true love is present, there is no distance of the heart.

Wishing you well.

Alisa :-)

[Hi]

You are blessed to have such a belief.

[Ardra]

even though we're miles apart

we'll meet inside the multiverse
we'll sing and dance from night till day,
where you'll wait for me
I'll soon be there

These lines touched so true....the loved ones who are seperated by the distance do meet at this wonderful place where time stands still. Only love exists ....thanks for sharing this wonderful creation

[Alisa Js]

You are most welcomed, Ria... I'm glad you enjoyed this one as well. I will be by soon.

read moreYou are most welcomed, Ria... I'm glad you enjoyed this one as well. I will be by soon.

Alisa

[Shabeeh Haider]

Very beautiful.
A place where two loved ones will always be together.
Dancing and singing in the companionship of the stars and moon.

[Alisa Js]

Thank you, SH...

I appreciate your time and comments. I will be by soon...
read moreThank you, SH...

I appreciate your time and comments. I will be by soon...

Alisa

[FIN]

Beautifully written, Ms. Js

This simplistic piece captures the emotion of a connection that breaks the barriers of time and space and sound wonderfully.

I loved it.

It reached down into the depths of my soul and evoked a place which exists beyond this physical and intellectual world.

Meditation has been built into my bones; and this piece touches upon those places beyond physicalities.

Much love,

LR

[Alisa Js]

Aloha LR,

I am quite touched and moved by your thoughts and comments.

There is a place that exists, in perfection.. this place human eyes can not see...

I believe that you know this, too..

Thank you again!

I will be by soon.

Alisa

[Tony Jordan]

Catching swoon - what a timeless feel this phrase has Alisa. The feeling of traversing the skies hand in hand (like Lois and Superman from the first movie) is superbly conveyed throughout.
Beautiful writing my friend.
:)

[Alisa Js]

Happy New Year, Tony!

Thank you for stopping by and for your time and comments.
read moreHappy New Year, Tony!

Thank you for stopping by and for your time and comments.

I only write when inspired and this one wrote itself as a result of a recent kindness shown toward me.

Wishing for you an awesone year!

Alisa ;-)

[Tony Jordan]

Happy New Year Alisa
Its a pleasure.
What would you like me to read more of?
;)

[Alisa Js]

Hello again, my friend from across the way...

The last part of my response to you was that..This one wrote itself after a recent kindness shown toward me, incredibly so.

I don't know why it doesn't show.. .hmmm...

Anyway, you are most welcome to read anything I've written. I'd love to read your thoughts.

Sending you thoughts of wonder...

Until then
Alisa ;-)

[Tony Jordan]

Don't worry that it doesn't show - it may well do but my intuition needs calibrating of late so don't mind if I don't get the jist Alisa.
I'll enjoy reading your work - thank you.
:))

[. serah .]

~ perfect (what i call) 'champagne poetry', dear alisa... so effervescent, spirited and romantic... and i love the hint of rhyme in the closing... so intoxicating...

[Alisa Js]

Happy New Year, serah!

Why thank you for the wonderful thoughts...

Wishing you well.

Alisa

[. serah .]

~ happy new year to you too, dear alisa... and you're very welcome... i absolutely loved this sip of poetic champagne to usher in the new year... :)

[Alisa Js]

This one wrote itself after a recent kindness shown toward me, incredibly so.

So nice to read your thoughts again. I'll be by soon.

Until then, may showers of blessings abound this year for you....

Alisa ;-0

[. serah .]

~ wow... that's wonderful... so happy for you... and thank you for your kindness... :)