The Best Taste

impossible to pour from an empty cup

left here to savor these moments in time

as we are inseparable

destined to be

and nothing else matters

but this ...

Reviews

[Hi]

I think this one is on your request list. I like the line structure here; more general to very specific, more to less words. I can picture something like the metaphor of a pour to the last drop in a coffee mug poured out.

[Alisa Js]

Thank you for your comments and time, Matt.

I do appreciate you... wishing you well.

Alisa ;-0

[Tony Jordan]

I see these cups as being equal in volume and having been poured, one can refill the other and vice versa. Perfect, Alisa.
:)

[Alisa Js]

Thank you, Tony...

When it's meant to be, everything is perfect...

Thank you for your time and comments. I do appreciate them and you.

Wishing you well.

Alisa ;-0

[Tony Jordan]

Is there such a thing as perfection - I mean any...
Hmm...

I enjoy reading and reviewing your work Alisa you know that. The appreciation is mutual.
Hope 2017 has started on the right foot (or the left, it that's the right foot...ah, you know...)

:))

[Alisa Js]

Thank you, Tony

2017 is a great year filled with hope and great joy!

Thank you for asking.

Alisa ;-)

[Tony Jordan]

You're welcome Alisa.
My pleasure always dear friend.
:))

[Miss Ithaca]

I love how this poem could easily be read with a happy or sad tone....because cups are warmth are the best to be shared for all time.

[Alisa Js]

Thank you, Miss Ithaca... for your comments and time. I will be by soon.

Alisa

[Adam Adams]

i love this moment when two spirits are destined and are seemed to be so inseparable esp. in the bondage of love.

sharing love via a cup of coffee then switch to the warmth of caramalized lips is all lovers taste through... overnight. very nicely licked here. well squirted.

[Alisa Js]

Yes, indeed...

There are those moments of magic that do transcend time and space.

[Ted Kniffen]

Very good, thought provoking piece, Alisa. There is nothing to pour from an empty cup, we each must fill it as we choose and if we're lucky, have someone to share it with. Good write.

[Alisa Js]

Thank you for your time and comments... my point exactly... when there is nothing left to pour, all is over... it is ended... the lights have darkened for the last time. All the more reason to celebrate each moment... make the memories now!

Wishing you well.

Alisa

[. serah .]

~ wow... this is exquisite and deep... ~ beautifully written... it's good to "savor" beautiful memories and create new ones on the canvas of life...

[Alisa Js]

Thank you for stopping by. I agree with you that we need to savor every moment... especially with those we love and care so deeply for... as long we are able.. as long as we have breath...as long as we remember as there will come a time when such things are no longer able...

Wishing you well.

Alisa

[. serah .]

~ you're very welcome, dear alisa...