Enchantment

there is a place for us

always here,

between each heartbeat

next to every sigh

your eyes do not lie

and mine,

they will forever be 

enchanted...

Reviews

[Hi]

This is enchanting so the title is a good one. It is concise, but leads to much more. I like "between each heartbeat" and have used similar metaphor. Thanks Alisa. Funny, I noticed I reviewed this one. Well, I will leave it anyway. I like this review too, but my memory I will have to check. :)

[Hi]

This is simply sweet. Thanks.

[Alisa Js]

Hello Matt,

You're most welcome and thank you for stopping by. I will be by soon.read moreHello Matt,

You're most welcome and thank you for stopping by. I will be by soon.

Alisa

[Tony Jordan]

You paint love in such beautiful hues Alisa. The codependence that is not an addiction but an unspoken yearning in true lovers is writ large here.
Super concentrate of love here...

[Alisa Js]

Thank you, Tony...

As a romantic soul, I believe in true love absolutely and love to write about it.

Can you tell???

lol

Thank you for your very kind comments. I do appreciate them, so.

Wishing you well.

Alisa ;-)

[Tony Jordan]

Can I tell...errmm...no lol

Best wishes bouncing back around the world at ya!

[Alisa Js]

Thank you, kind one...

Wishing you a happy holiday season and a fabulous New Year!!!

from out here, somewhere in the middle of the deep, blue Pacific...

;-)

[Tony Jordan]

Ditto Alisa - with bells - slieghbell on...
(hugs)

[Alisa Js]

Thanks...

I have a question. Are you from the UK? Meaning, were you born there? If so, you must have the most beautiful accent.

((hugs))

Alisa

[Adam Adams]

sensually passionate, & romantically innocent write it is. u always get urself licked in very deep threads of Cummins words. great work, as always.

[Alisa Js]

Thank you for your comments and time. I am a fan of ee cummings, but I take it you knew that already...

Sending you smiles...

Alisa

[Adam Adams]

ah.. E. E cunning? wow. me too even a biggest fan of "Cummings".. and i guess, u already knew this too. xoxo

[Ted Kniffen]

Very well done. Short but tells a good story.

[Alisa Js]

Thank you, Ted... I will be by soon.

Alisa

[D Ruppert]

Your words paint such an intimate portrait of what every heart and soul so desperately seeks, yearns to feel, that special soul in their life that completes them. Sweeping the reader a realm of serenity, saturated with warmth, love, acceptance...the line that stands out to me is :Your eyes don't lie"...eyes say all...it's a gateway to one's soul really..amazing as always...

[Alisa Js]

Aloha serah,

Ah yes, it is...may the spell never be broken.

Wishing you well.

Alisa

[Alisa Js]

Thank you j... I am flattered.

Will drop by soon.

Alisa

[Alisa Js]

Aloha Tori and thank you.

[. serah .]

~ i love this infinitely poetic definition of togetherness, dear alisa... i like the intensity of proximity conveyed... it is indeed enchanting to be enchanted... :)