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A Poem by Alisa Js

I have loved you without boundaries
or expectation
moving forward
simply to be.
these hands
is there another function 
other than to express tender care
these eyes
let me see 
beyond the scope of superficiality
this mouth
what can I do?
other than to say
it will all work out
somehow, 
someway
how could it not?
when you are the only one
I care about
and always will
in some fashion or form...
in spite of
lesser roads traveled 
leading to places unknown
somewhere in this mind's eye
you are here
everywhere ...

© 2016 Alisa Js


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somewhere in this mind's eye
you are here
everywhere ...

Says it all.....enjoyed reading it

Posted 7 Years Ago


Alisa Js

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Ria..
-- it's one of the purest heartsongs you've ever written, dear alisa... -- it's so earnest and so poetic that i can almost hear your voice in your words... -- the way you've written about hands and eyes is magical and brimming with so much emotion that one can relate to how the poet is feeling instantly... -- i love the alliteration in "in some fashion or form"... and i love the closing... "somewhere in the mind's eye" is an expression which speaks about a deeper seeing for me... -- excellent work... it's amazing to witness your journey as a poet...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Alisa Js

8 Years Ago

Thank you, kind one...

I am deeply touched and humbled by your words.

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. serah .

8 Years Ago

-- the privilege is all mine, dear alisa... your sensitive heart always glows in your words and insp.. read more

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Alisa Js
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