There is a place for you ( revised)

There is a place for you ( revised)

A Poem by Alisa Js

it feels like I've known you before time was with nothing in between 
you and me, it's the only thing that makes sense in my head. how else can I explain except to say there is a wonder beyond expression and yet, I understand. how could I not? the answer to the question remains inside this heart of preparation, patiently waiting anticipating, contemplating. why tarry one moment longer as days stretch one into another and you, still inside my every thought surrounding every dream I look for the door that leads to you,
open for me...

© 2015 Alisa Js


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wow - i absolutely love this - you've loved him all along, searching for the courage to be with him - and you did find the courage to finally approach love into the relationship

best,
steph

Posted 8 Years Ago


Alisa Js

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
Last three line of your poem say me something that we are nice friend

Posted 8 Years Ago


Alisa Js

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your comments, SS
"Inside this heart of preparation..."
breath-taking poetry Alisa.

Time waits for no man ...but it has no choice but to give the reigns to fate... in the case of lovers.
Good to see you :)


Posted 8 Years Ago


Alisa Js

8 Years Ago

Happy New Year!🎉

Thank you for your time and comments. I do appreciate them so.read more
ANTO

8 Years Ago

Thank you for sharing Alisa
Have a loving and prolific 2016
There has to be a day when a person gently beckons and whispers, 'I'm yours, you're mine, we're Us ' and, with every breath of your being you know it's right. Til then i can only suppose patience becomes a best friend in spite of the interim loneliness. The power of one's emotion is just bearable, but -which door to open, what words to say: This is a beautifully written poem - capturing more than the search for an answer.. ..

Posted 8 Years Ago


Alisa Js

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Emma...I will be by soon.

Alisa💫
I know this feeling, and its as frustrating as it is wonderful. You are truly the inspirational icon for romantic poetry, at least in my world, lol. You have always excelled in emotion and class, your heart is a constant, and bigger than the state I live in, I have always admired that about you.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Alisa Js

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words and thoughts! Wishing you the best year ever!🎉
Corset

8 Years Ago

You have already made my year the best year ever ;)
I like it so much. Thank you for sharing this great poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Alisa Js

8 Years Ago

Thank you abd, I will be by soon.
Amazing as always. Certainly takes the reader on a journey through the writers heart and mind. The search for that door that leads to the love they seek. Know is there yet unable to reach. Determined to have no matter how long it takes.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Alisa Js

8 Years Ago

yes, indeed. Thank you for your comments.. Happy New Year
There is no doubt that whom do you wait for; must be the luckiest person..... Just fabulously fantastic and marvelously awesome....

Posted 8 Years Ago


Alisa Js

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
really beautiful use of language, it reads wonderfully. The emotion feels very sweet, tender, which makes the whole poem very soft and gentle - lovely piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Alisa Js

8 Years Ago

Happy holidays!

Thank you for your comments, I will be by soon,

Alisa.. read more
and love is right there, on the other side of that door...i have known this feeling...and unfortunately at times, failed to go through it, out of fear.

i don't think the speaker in this poem feels that fear...she is ready.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Alisa Js

8 Years Ago

Thank you and happy holidays. 😃

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