There is a place for you ( revised)

it feels like I've known you before time was with nothing in between 

you and me, it's the only thing that makes sense in my head. how else can I explain except to say there is a wonder beyond expression and yet, I understand. how could I not? the answer to the question remains inside this heart of preparation, patiently waiting anticipating, contemplating. why tarry one moment longer as days stretch one into another and you, still inside my every thought surrounding every dream I look for the door that leads to you,

open for me...

Reviews

[highonwords]

wow - i absolutely love this - you've loved him all along, searching for the courage to be with him - and you did find the courage to finally approach love into the relationship

best,
steph

[Alisa Js]

Thank you!

[samparks,sam]

Last three line of your poem say me something that we are nice friend

[Alisa Js]

Thank you for your comments, SS

[ANTO]

"Inside this heart of preparation..."
breath-taking poetry Alisa.

Time waits for no man ...but it has no choice but to give the reigns to fate... in the case of lovers.
Good to see you :)

[Alisa Js]

Happy New Year!🎉

Thank you for your time and comments. I do appreciate them so.read moreHappy New Year!🎉

Thank you for your time and comments. I do appreciate them so.

Wishing you well.

Alisa💫

[ANTO]

Thank you for sharing Alisa
Have a loving and prolific 2016

[emmajoy]

There has to be a day when a person gently beckons and whispers, 'I'm yours, you're mine, we're Us ' and, with every breath of your being you know it's right. Til then i can only suppose patience becomes a best friend in spite of the interim loneliness. The power of one's emotion is just bearable, but -which door to open, what words to say: This is a beautifully written poem - capturing more than the search for an answer.. ..

[Alisa Js]

Thank you, Emma...I will be by soon.

Alisa💫

[Corset]

I know this feeling, and its as frustrating as it is wonderful. You are truly the inspirational icon for romantic poetry, at least in my world, lol. You have always excelled in emotion and class, your heart is a constant, and bigger than the state I live in, I have always admired that about you.

[Alisa Js]

Thank you for your kind words and thoughts! Wishing you the best year ever!🎉

[Corset]

You have already made my year the best year ever ;)

[abderrahmane dakir]

I like it so much. Thank you for sharing this great poem.

[Alisa Js]

Thank you abd, I will be by soon.

[D Ruppert]

Amazing as always. Certainly takes the reader on a journey through the writers heart and mind. The search for that door that leads to the love they seek. Know is there yet unable to reach. Determined to have no matter how long it takes.

[Alisa Js]

yes, indeed. Thank you for your comments.. Happy New Year

[anonymousprankt]

There is no doubt that whom do you wait for; must be the luckiest person..... Just fabulously fantastic and marvelously awesome....

[Alisa Js]

Thank you!

[Alias]

really beautiful use of language, it reads wonderfully. The emotion feels very sweet, tender, which makes the whole poem very soft and gentle - lovely piece.

[Alisa Js]

Happy holidays!

Thank you for your comments, I will be by soon,

Alisa💫

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and love is right there, on the other side of that door...i have known this feeling...and unfortunately at times, failed to go through it, out of fear.

i don't think the speaker in this poem feels that fear...she is ready.

[Alisa Js]

Thank you and happy holidays. 😃