NIght Visions

it was somewhere in the middle of a smile

right around the time your words met mine,

I knew I would need you forever.

and to this day, 

no one compares

a universe to yourself 

a galaxy where we

found ourselves free and

in constant bliss.

beyond unparalleled happiness, 

a dream within a dream

and yet, you are here

your world has become mine

and I am yours,

forever we remain

this eternal serenade...

Reviews

[B J Hughes]

Powerful introduction! I could not stop reading the words that any man would covet for himself. A galaxy in your hands, in your heart . . . what a wonderful expression, a lovely adoration! And the "eternal serenade", one providing harmony to the other's melody. Good stuff Alisa! I loved this much!

[Alisa Js]

Thank you so much! I will be by soon,

[B J Hughes]

Aye! I will welcome your visitation. :o)

[Arthur Henn]

A word, a phrase, a written word like this can and will bring light to a night's vision... Beautifully written Alisa Js

[Alisa Js]

Thank you, I will be by soon.

[David Scott]

We find many loves in our life. Some are loves of gratitude and respect for our parents and the friends around us. Some are loves of giving and caring for children and the gifts we find in Nature with pets and gardens. Some are loves of conveniences or need, born from desires and missing pieces. Some loves grow a root into our lives like great trees or even tangles vines (depending...). Then there are the souls we match. The polarity of our beings slipping together in an instant... "love at first site". This is not a fairy tale. Usually it is attraction at first sight, but when it lingers and feeds vitality to your soul, then you know it was love.
This is what you pen here. Lovely!

[Alisa Js]

Thank you so much for your most perceptive comment...spot on!

Alisa😍

[alifeacoustic]

Well I was going to point out how beautiful the first line was, but then I read more and seen it just got more beautiful as it went along, if anything gaining strength as each line passed. Im not an expert on the subject by any means, but suspect this is whats known technically, as a perfect write. :)

[Alisa Js]

Why, thank you! I am deeply flattered.

Sending you smiles :-)

Alisa

[D Ruppert]

A most delightful masterpiece, to achieve unparalleled happiness would certainly be a dream come true.

[Alisa Js]

Hello David,

Yes it absolutely would! A dream within a dream....

Wishing you well.

Alisa ;-)

[Relic]

That kind of bliss is rare and only dreamed of by many.

You're very lucky.

[Alisa Js]

Thank you, Relic

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"constant bliss" so rare, maybe only in dreams....

love the hope expressed here.

[Alisa Js]

Exactly j

Thank you for your time. Wishing you well.

Alisa 💫

[.]

-- oh, what a lovely song, lovely alisa... it's as beautiful as "a dream within a dream"...

[Alisa Js]

Thank you, serah

Sending you smiles 😃😃😃

[.]

-- thank you for the smiles and ditto... :)