It's not too late, is it?

feathers from heaven flutter by

as fountains to forever shimmer and grin,

you left me standing here

wondering about

the meaning of sin as distant eyes dim

carry me away

like you did back in the beginning

can we recapture

that elusive moment of complete happiness

seasons come and go

laughter rises and then falls away

can we taste again

that wonder, if at all

our lives move forward

and yet, we remain

mired in doubt and worthless frustration

might we again find that first refrain...

Reviews

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~~ ohhhhh... (for me) this is moving beyond measure, alisa... ~~ i deeply regret neglecting my partner at a crucial time in his life... ~~ i hope that one day i am able to make it up to him... he deserves that... and more...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it isn't easy, but i do feel like love can be rekindled...

because moving forward in such frustration just makes life miserable-----

Adam and Eve got past their sin---thrown from the garden, they still made their way...why can't others?

[Alisa Js]

Indeed... I do agree.. forgiveness is divine.

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