Promise Me

Sitting here listening to meanings, beyond words spoken Wondering how did I manage to miss the pathway, that led to happy ever after Promises made yet unfullfilled, they linger somewhere in time beyond this present season We wait for something, maybe nothing as nothing here makes sense And I find myself on the outside, scrambling for the key I have yet to find...

Reviews

[David Scott]

You set the imprint of this moment in stone... Like a fossil imprinted in the limestone of lost time...
Was it a waste. Were no promises kept? Can any of us be true, really true to a contract made before the products are even brought to market? I don't know... There is such a thing as honor. There is such a thing a compassion and forgiveness. Yet... There are weak minds and failing hearts leaving better souls to suffer the avoidable conclusions.
A key you say? If only we could lock up the wandering hearts before the seal was broken.
The doorway of tomorrow needs no key and you can never lock out the past. One only hopes an ocean of love dilutes the pain.
Beautiful heartbreaking write.

[Alisa Js]

Hello David,

Thank you for your most comforting and compassionate thoughts.
read moreHello David,

Thank you for your most comforting and compassionate thoughts.

Wishing you well.

Alisa🌟

[Daisy]

wow really awesome.... great words you write....

[Alisa Js]

Thank you again., I am flattered.

Alisa😃

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poem. Led the reader to honest ending. Looking for things that cannot be found. I like the tone of the thoughts in the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Alisa Js]

Thank you! I will be by soon

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

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~~ i think you expressed something a lot of us relate to in a very moving way... i wait for my soulmate to recover from a terrible kinda brainwashing...

[Alisa Js]

Thank you for your comments... I am flattered.

Sending you smiles..

Alisa ;-)

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~~ my privilege, dear alisa...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

aloha!

my friend, you wrote me here....

still waiting...past many seasons...still looking for the key...too many near misses.

and love doesn't make sense.

[Alisa Js]

Aloha,

Thank you for your time and your comments. I know what you mean!

Alisa