Blissful Listening

As the lyrics inside my head continued 

I listened

Over and over stretching through hours and holding minutes

Without skipping a beat 

Soft sweet sounds, yet the melody was clear 

One million times, all the same 

The song had spider legs that reached around 

Sub-conscious wave lengths 

Slipping over and under consciously 

Without missing a note, 

Always in the key of C

Like the way I think of you, sometimes 

Happy tunes, great voice 

Was there another venue dear, beyond the spoken tongue 

Inside our dreams where we could be

Yet never willing to discuss 

The conversation tarried 

It was nightfall and the obvious remained untouched 

We turned our heads to steal a kiss 

With love comes a certain madness 

And yet, we hold on 

Believing to receive 

Place me inside your seams 

Head to toe and all places in between 

We will glide beyond all known galaxies 

Resting only to catch handfuls of falling stars 

Mystical reverie...

Reviews

[David Scott]

This feels like I have read this before... Like a song you hear around a campfire. Only I thought it was in the key of G. ;)
A blissful tune indeed.

[Alisa Js]

Thank you so much!

[Huw]

''With love comes certain madness''.

Of the four I would say this is eros as no other form of love could be said to make one mad.

Nice, thought provoking and memory stirring....H.

[Alisa Js]

Thank you again for your time and comments. I appreciate them and you.

Alisa ;-)

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~~ this is a beautiful poem, alisa... ~~ i don't know this space yet... because of too many problems in life... but i can imagine that it exists...

[Alisa Js]

Thank you, kind one....

Wishing you smiles across the miles...

alisa ;-)

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~~ you're very welcome, dear alisa... and ditto...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

damn, i caught in the web of this poem...the spidery legs gripping my emotions...but i felt safe...

there is something mystical about your writing...as you talk about those places we often go that we don't want to put into words, because it may break the spell....
your words create that very spell.

j.

[Alisa Js]

😃 thank you, j for your kind words. I am flattered ...

Alisa💫