Dreams

Dreams

A Poem by Alisa Js

shall we 
on a lark
run until there's no tomorrow
laugh like children
play until we both drop
from sheer exhaustion
and lollipops

we will linger, love
just me and you

in this place we both can visit
meet me in my mind
visit in the land of dreams
where anything is possible
if we just believe

I am here...

© 2015 Alisa Js


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"we will linger, love
just me and you" - gorgeously romantic Alisa - wow!

You write this genre so well I wish there was more of it. Its...delightful and innocent but with a deeply passionate longing

The final line is a dream within a dream ...
Bravo gifted poet. :)))

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ANTO

9 Years Ago

I would 'read more' my dear friend but WC had truncated your message here lol (see comment above)
Alisa Js

9 Years Ago

Hello ANTO,

Thank you for your deeply flattering comments.. I am touched.
read more
ANTO

9 Years Ago

ditto lol -



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Great piece of work! I have a piece called dream land you may enjoy! I like the thought
of getting away from the stresses of life,thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Alisa Js

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your comments! I'm on my way to read your piece.

Alisa💫
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~~ ah... a lovely heartsong made of magical smiles... :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Alisa Js

9 Years Ago

😃. Thank you for your kind words and thoughts.

Alisa💫
.

9 Years Ago

~~ you're very welcome, sweet alisa... :)
"we will linger, love
just me and you" - gorgeously romantic Alisa - wow!

You write this genre so well I wish there was more of it. Its...delightful and innocent but with a deeply passionate longing

The final line is a dream within a dream ...
Bravo gifted poet. :)))

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ANTO

9 Years Ago

I would 'read more' my dear friend but WC had truncated your message here lol (see comment above)
Alisa Js

9 Years Ago

Hello ANTO,

Thank you for your deeply flattering comments.. I am touched.
read more
ANTO

9 Years Ago

ditto lol -
in dreams, in mind...we can go wherever, and with whomever we want...
anything is possible.
a very playful, romantic write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alisa Js

9 Years Ago

Thanks, Jacob

I wrote this just for fun on a whim....

Alisa😃

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Alisa Js

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