Winter Cues

it is winter, dear

deep and wide

full of cold hearted lizards

blasting underhandedness

silent

as steps creep 'round

leaving town

if I say I love you

will that blow away, too?

crumpled here inside myself

like some two-bit fool

tossed about

it don't seem right

maybe there is no right or wrong

it is what it is

my life,

your choice

left to our utter

and eventual

demise...

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[jacob erin-cilberto]

but there is spring, and hopefully not demise but rebirth...

we often feel like a fool in love...but we have to consider that we might let the other person make us feel...and if we can avoid that, we can just be okay with who we are...

we make choices, not always good ones, but we learn from them.

[Alisa Js]

Happy New Year Tara!

I trust all is well. Thank you for your very kind words and thoughts.

They mean a lot to me....

Sending you smiles.

alisa ;-)

[Tara]

"It is what it is". I have this written on my wall. I really do. Hello my friend. So nice to come here and see your words. Its like going home again and finding the comfort of things that have remained the same. Like your wonderful heartfelt romantic poetry. I loved this. Looking forward to Spring, but it is what it is. :^)

[Alisa Js]

Thank you, serah for taking time out of your day to drop by.

So nice to read your thoughts.

Alisa :-)

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:: the privilege is all mine... :)

[Alisa Js]

Thanks again...

[.]

:: heartbreaking but absolutely brilliant poetry... your tone is intense beyond measure... and so powerful... you said it and you said it like a courageous dudette...

[Alisa Js]

;-)

Thank you for being you!

You are deeply appreciated.

alisa ;-)

[Perdition]

And then there it was....The unspoken Bravissimo!