Solitaire

Solitaire

A Poem by Alisa Js

I have lived a thousand dreams
each one complete,
achieved and gazed from an ethereal mountain hedge
where eagles cry~silently with gilded wings,
but nothing prepared me for this
lingering enticement unlike any other
exhilarating, mind-haunting
personification.
thoughts of you linger long after
we...
slipped off the edge 
of external complexities
I know that you know.
impossible and yet,
in my world
I walk alone

© 2014 Alisa Js


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Wonderful piece of writing and I'm sure many will relate to your work

Posted 10 Years Ago


Alisa Js

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your time and comment. Wishing you a great weekend.

:-)

Alis.. read more
A. Amos

10 Years Ago

You're most welcome my dear
no matter what we explore with another, it always comes back to the "me."

to the world alone...we share our world with others, but in the end, we all walk alone...

and we live those thousand dreams alone...

nicely done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Thank you for your time and comments.

Alisa ;-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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:: powerful and powerfully poignant poetry... i sense the beauty and the pain that you speak of... i know the solitude that you articulate so well... "ethereal mountain edge" is a spectacular image and expression... very inspiring work...

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Alisa Js
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