Transition

I am here

under this midnight obsession

alone with these thoughts

that bought the quiet, beyond eerie.

the chatter has sashayed

down through the open floor lords

next to the dark door

that leads to new worlds

what do you do

when your world starts to plummet

reality removed and

realigned.

where is the next leap

or chance for another

shot.

destiny unknown 

except under salty tides

there are no words here

only thoughts

dark images slide

blowing whispers spent,

what do you place in the spaces

now empty

filled once with memories and dreams...

Reviews

[Alisa Js]

Hello again, Laura

Thank you again. I appreciate you and P, aka J...taking the time out of your busy lives to stop by.

There are times in one's life journey when words can't begin to describe the particular arena one may find themselves in. Up is down, right is no longer recognized, and everything else is flipped sideways, twice over and again, just for fun. Reality appears to stretch quiet without sound...

aj

[Little Whisper]

Even reading it a second time... I still felt the Wow... this is one of my favorites of yours.
I will be coming back to read this often.

[Little Whisper]

I began to point out my favorite lines in your poem... I realized it would be best just to say Wow... I like all of them... I felt all of them. This poem pulled me in.

[Alisa Js]

Ducks????

hmmm...

lol

;-)

yes, of course, I was writing about ducks in all their magical glory!

Thanks, you!

alisa ;-0

[Perdition]

Ahhh..now I see the wealth of it. Beautiful and a very weird way to write about ducks..but I'll take it. Loved the opening stanza.

[Alisa Js]

Hello Laura,

Thank you for your time and encouraging words. I am glad you can relate.

alisa ;-)

[Little Whisper]

I feel this soooo deeply. Wow....

[Alisa Js]

Thank you for the kind words.

[Alisa Js]

Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

A wonderful poem indeed. The ending is awesome...:)