Truth

Senryu 3-5-3

lasting love

stays with those who find

we have found

(ajs 4-18-09)

Reviews

[Alisa Js]

Thank you for you time and comments...

;-)

[MAC]

A wonderfully written Senryu poem.!

[Tara]

LOVELY!!!

[Alisa Js]

Hello from across land and sea,

Truth, you inquire? One may answer with something that sounds a lot like perspective,frame of reference and all that follows...

Hmmmmm....

;-)

Wishing for you the best of everything.

Always,

Alisa ;-)

[Perdition]

Ahhh...The days of Senryu have returned. Certainly worthy of wings. But is it "Truth"...hmmm ?
Well done and Happy Holidays.

[Alisa Js]

Thank you, kind one...

Wishing you happy holidays

:-)

[Little Whisper]

It's wonderful that you have said soooo much in so few words... I really like this. It's everlasting. :)

[Alisa Js]

Thank you all.

Sam : This is a Senryu 3-5-3 syllable count.

Jacob, serah: Thanks again and happy holidays!

alisa ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

Short but very beautiful...
Aloha